《高考短文改错——专项训练 30 篇——及答案分析》
1. 短文改错
1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾ 删除：把剩余的词用斜线〔
) ，并在其下边写出该加的词。
〕划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Dear Peter,
As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have
been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.
One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you
quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is
The phrase Miaosha first
before
Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked.
other. But now it's
wide used when you achieve
came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders If you will describe somebody as a
your purpose in very short time.
Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.
You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning,
more about our language and culture.
you'll know
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
2.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文， 请你改正你同桌写的以下作文． 文中共
有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正．
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增添：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧） 删除：把剩余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．
，并在其下边写出该加的词．
改正：在错的词下画一横线（
________），并在该词下边写出改正后的词．
注意：
1 ．每处错误及改正均仅限一词； 2 ．只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第
11 处起）不计分．
In my village a lot of children have left school for many different
reasorn ． Some families kids have to earn money
are so poor to
send their
children
to school ， so their
many parents
． I feel
to support their families ． There are also
do not think it useless to send their children to school
their children do something else rather than to let them go to school worried this
． They prefer to have
． I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive
， because one
． So ways
education ． And it is necessary of Us to care about the children day they will play important part in the construction of our country must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies 3.
． 51. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）
，并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线〔
〕划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling
in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid saved.
I was proud with what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
4. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下作
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文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧) ，并在其下边写出该加的词。 删除：把剩余的词用斜线 注意： (1) (2)
每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
their parents on their 18th birthdays. it and most of them have come up with saying it's
best way to express their
( ﹨) 划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
Last Tuesday, the Students' Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for All the students are active their
in responding
ideas. Somechoose to write a letter
appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a
big meal to show that they've already grown up.
As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they've devoted to
bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us. 5. 文。
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间相互改正作文，
请你改正你同桌的以下作
文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。 删除：把剩余的词用斜线 (\\)
划掉。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧) ，并在该词下边写出该加的词。 改正：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： 1、每处错误及改正均仅限一词。
2、只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从 11 处起 ) 不计分
I often go to a weekend school. So did many of my classmates. This seems popular among students. Good weekend schools have excellent teachers which help us improve our studies. Besides, we get to know students from another schools and learn about their campus of life.
So every coin has two sides. Our school work is already a heavy burden. Extra lesson often take up too much of our time. In addition, pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects. We may also find ourselves very tired on Mondays to concentrate
on the lessons
in our own school.
We should think seriously about this issue and make best use of our time.
6. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或 改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（
改正：在错的词下划一横线（
注意： 1. 每处错误及改正均仅限一词；
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He
wanted teach me about animals, bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire,
have our barbecue.
Just then
a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows
insects
and trees.
My uncles all come along with
，并在其下边写出该加的词。 ）划掉。
），并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
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on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying
down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but
fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn ’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I
learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! 7.
或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧), 并在此符号下边写出该加的词。 删除：把剩余的词用斜线
( ＼) 划掉。
改正： 在错的词下划一横线 , 并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： (1) 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
(2) 只同意改正 10 处 , 多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
Dear Angela,
I am so happy to learn
you are coming to study in our school
and stay at my home.
My home is at , Mingzu Street. A five-minutes walk from my home along Mingzu Street will lead you to a crossroads, when Mingzu Street meets Baohu Road. On the corner of the crossroads lie a shopping mall, where you can get everything
短文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添、删除
you needed. Walking for about 300 meter along Baohu Road, you’ll see our school on right. There we will spend most of the daytime. In the end of Mingzu Street stands the new railway station, and that it I can’t wait to seeing you in China.
’s easy for you to reach. As a bus
stop is just next to my home, Bus will direct take you there. Yours, Li Hua 8.
71. 英语课上 , 老师要求同桌同学相互改正作文。 假定以下小作文为你同桌所写， 请你对 其进行改正。文中共有
10 处错误 , 每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添
^），并在此符号下边写出该加的词。
, 删除
或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ 删除：把剩余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： 1．每处错误及其改正均仅限一词。 2．只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第
11 处起）不计分。
3．一定按答题要求做题，不然不给分。
It was quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, read the Sunday newspaper and expecting a couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her Sunday clothes. we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.
They said, “Well,
” One lady said,
“Well, your husband is very kind to inviting us to tea. ” I thought, “My God, my husband must have been mad. ” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they should have gone
to the house on the another side of the street. 9.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，
请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。
文
中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号
() ，并在其下边写出该加的词。 4 / 40
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删除：把剩余的词用 ( ＼) 划掉。
改正：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire,
on the bird.
Neither of the arrows hit
the target.
have our barbecue. Just then
a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows
Suddenly the arrows was flying
down at us from the sky
— they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but
fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn ’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I
learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
10.
下边短文中有 10 处错误。请在有错误的地方增添，删除或改正某个单词。 增添：在缺词处加一个漏词符号 ( ∧) ，并在其下边写上该加的词。 删除：把剩余的词用斜线
( ﹨) 划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写上改正后的词。
注意： (1) 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
(2) 只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
This morning I went to the shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got there, I noticed
a foreign
lady talk to a salesgirl.
But the salesgirl
didn't
understand that the foreigner was saying. They to help them. The lady is Australian.
both looked worrying. I went up
shoes. thanks
She wanted to buy a pair of traveling
All of them expressed their
So I told it to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she took it. She sings high praise for my spoken English. to me. I felt happy that I expressed myself free in English. 11.
若是英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，
请你改正你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有
10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及单词的增添、删除或改正。增添：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线＼划掉。
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改正：在错词下边划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： 1、每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2 、只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform
in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing
up. I am always young when I was staying
with them.
I know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.
12.
71. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，
请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。
文
中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删减或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）
，并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词。
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
I saw an accident happen on my way to home this afternoon . A girl
as well as her classmates
were crossing the street on a zebra crossing after a young man drove a motorbike towards her . The
young man saw the girl and tried to stop , and he drove too fast to stop . He hit the girl and fell off
his motorbike . The girl was bad hurt and couldn ’t move . The young man didn ’t know how to do .
I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed . Soon the police arrive . They sent her
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the hospital at once .
One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking .
I think it is danger to drive very fast . 13.
71. 第一节 短文改错（ 10 分）
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization,
the environment has been polluted.
Lots of studies have been
problem. The airs
live
shown that global warming has already We must found ways to protect to regret it. 14.
71. 文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
become a very seriously
If we fail
we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out.
your environment.
to do so, we’ll
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
^ ），并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Something was happened while I was ill. While I was hugging me with pain, my two beautiful dogs lay right beside me. They were squeezed in the sofa so tight
that
I could hardly move. They were my comfort. While
I was in my own little
world of sickness, the weather outside becomes warm. People were cutting away the dead brown branch, better.
ready new blooms. I walked outside and to my astonished,
my hedge was blooming, due to which my illness seemed to take a turn for the
Today, I feel so thankful to my health. Maybe sometimes we really need to feel painful, so that we can appreciate the time where we feel good. That is
so easy not to care too much how other people feel or what they are going through. 15.
短文改错 ( 共 10 分)
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下边短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增添、删除或改正某个单词。
增添 : 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧), 并在其下边写上该加的词。
删除 : 把剩余的词用斜线 \\ 划掉。
改正 : 在错的词下画一横线 , 并在该词下边写上改正后的词。
只同意改正 10 处 , 多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one. things bad, now I have to share is first
” His new job meant I
had to say goodbye to
Maggie. Tomorrow never fall
my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make
a room with my younger sister,
tiring,
but I know I ’ll
day of school. I am awfully slee p.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, my past life and my only friend. Yours, Rosemary 16.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，
is my only souvenir( 纪念品 ) from
请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。 作文中
共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： 1, 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2, 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Once, when l was a teenager, my father and l were standing in line to
buy tickets
for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.
This family made deep impression
money. hands.
Their clothes was not expensive,
in line,
on me. There were eight and they were clean.
children, The children
parents,
both
probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of well- behaved, all of us standing
two-by-two behind their
were held
They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another
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performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense
they have never been to the circus before. 62. （ 1）___
（ 2） ___
（ 3） ___
（ 4）___
（5） ___
（ 6） ____
（ 7）
___（8） ___ （9） ____ 17.
（ 10）____
81. 下边短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增添、删除或改正某个单词。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧） ，并在其下边写上该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（
- ）划掉。
改正：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词； 起）不计分。
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处
I ’m glad to hear the news what you
the beautiful
’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit.
You know, Hangzhou is by its beautifully It was the capital and old towers.
city on the east coast of China. It is said
that Marco Polo, a well-known Italy
scenery. of several
traveler once visits Hangzhou, and was struck
it has a lot famous temples
Hangzhou is one of the oldest city with a long history. dyn asties. As a result,
on three sides or many beautiful at home and at abroad. I think
The West Lake, with green hills
a large number of visitors
parks around, attracts see you here soon.
you’ll have a good time during your stay in Hangzhou. I
’m looking forward to
(1)_______(2)_______(3)_______(4)_______(5)_______ (6)_______(7)_______(8)_______(9)_______(10)_______
18. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在却此处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧) ，并在其下边写出该加的词。删除：把剩余的词用斜线 (\\) 划掉。
改正：在错的词下边画一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。注意： (1) (2)
每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
Dear David,
I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of and I just can ’t answer. Besides,
stop me. In the fact that I
many exams, I used cellphones to surf the
seldom cheat in exams
net for
I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something.
confidence. It ’s
As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self-
time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!
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19. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添，删除或改正。
增添： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧ ) ，并在其下边写出该加的词。删除：把剩余的词用斜线 (\\) 划掉。
改正： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。注意： (1) (2)
每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不记分。
The environment pollution is more and more seriously today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. People health has been greatly affecting by air, have died of disease Firstly, we shouldn long as possible. Don
’s Many people life, it ’s
noise and water pollution.
live the better
caused by pollutio n. In order to
time for us to protect our world.
’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, ’t use plastic bags. Besides, we must plant more trees
be more and more beautiful.
reduce and reuse things, what saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so and stop people cut them down. Wehope our world will
20. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧), 并在此符号下边写出该加的词。删除：把剩余的词用斜线 ( ＼ ) 划掉。
改正： 在错的词下划一横线 , 并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： 1、每处错误及其改正均仅限一词； 2、只同意改正 10 处 , 多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) Dear Angela,
I am so happy to learn
you are coming to study in our school
and stay at my home.
My home is at , Mingzu Street. A five-minutes walk from my home along Mingzu Street will lead you to a crossroads, when Mingzu Street meets Baohu Road. On the corner of the crossroads lie a shopping mall, where you can get everything
不计分。
you needed. Walking for about 300 meter along Baohu Road, you’ll on right. There we will spend most of the daytime. In the end of Mingzu Street stands the new railway station, and that it
see our school
’s easy for you to reach. As a bus
stop is just next to my home, Bus will direct take you there.
21. 文中共有十处语言错误， 每句中最多两处。 每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^) ，并在其下边写出该加的词。删除：把剩余的词用斜线 (\\) 划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： (1) (2)
每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
Nowadays Grade Three students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which
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is rather common. The followed suggestions may help reduce it. First of all, know exactly with it.
what lead to your pressure, Secondly, set up a goal what is
and then you can take measures to deal not too high, in another words, don’t
put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Lastly,
make friend with others,
such as your classmates,
your parents. They will “impossible is nothing 22.
删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 删除：把剩余的词用斜线
your teachers,
really
understand you and come to your help when you are
in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for
”.
文中共有十处语言错误， 每句中最多两处。 每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、
(^) ，并在其下边写出该加的词。
(\\) 划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： (1) (2)
每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
Nowadays Grade Three students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. The followed suggestions may help reduce it. First of all, know exactly with it.
what lead to your pressure, Secondly, set up a goal what is
not too high,
and then you can take measures to deal
in another words, don’t
put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Lastly,
make friend with others, such as your classmates,
your parents. They will “impossible is nothing
your teachers,
really
understand you and come to your help when you are ”.
in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for 23.
下边短文中共有 10 处错误，错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
），并在此符号下边写出该加的词。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
改正：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意：
1 ．每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2 ．只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Andrew is a 28
－ year － old American man ， which life is very difficult
． Some people used to make fun of him and
， he finally learn
because he born without arms or legs said he looked like a monster
． Doing normal things seemed impossibly to
him ． However， Andrew never gave up ， and after many failures to swim，fish and even surf ．Most surprising
，he completed university and earned
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the two degrees
．Now he is the CEO of two company
．
When asking about the secret of his success ， Andrew's answer is ：Attitude is
altitude ．To him ， nothing is impossible if you has enough determination to overcome difficulties ． He thinks a positive attitude is the key of success
． 24.
第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每题 1 分，满分 10 分） 请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，
文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。 增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
改正：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意；
1 ．每处错误仅限 1 词； 2 ．只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第
Dear Sir ，
11 处起）不计分。
I read their advertisement in yesterday's
qualified
graduation from a middle school learn bookkeeping ， typewriting and has a good command of English I can be a member in your company Li Hua 25. 改正。
China Daily ． I feel I am
， and I also
to the job in your company． I'm 20 year old and in a good health ． After
， I studied English for six years and public
relations
．I do good in
． I'm interesting in the position of a
． I'll work hard until
operating PC
secretary ． I want very much be accepted by your company
．
文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或
增添：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下边写出该加的词。删除：把剩余的词用斜线＼划掉。
改正：在错词下边划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： 1、每处错误及其改正均仅限一词； 分。
2 、只同意改正 10 处，多者从第 11 处不计
Last Sunday we went to see a AIDS patient in hospital. We bought her some flower and fruit. She was glad to see us. Many people began to avoid see her after she was infected to HIV virus. A doctor told us that the HIV virus mustn ’t be
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infected through daily communication and that those who suffering from AIDS
shouldn ’t be looked down. We had a talk with the woman and gave her some CDs as gifts. She was moved to tears and promise to be optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease. in the trouble. 26.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下短
Wepromised to see her again before
left.
In my opinion,
the world will become more beautiful
if all of us love each other and help those
文。短文中共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧） ，并在其下边写出该加的词。 删除：把剩余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
改正：在错的词下边划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2. 只同意改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Dear Tom,
very much, but I want tennis. Our favorite like history, for I think it
I ’m an Australian boy of 16 years old, which lives in Sydney. I like Chinese
a pen pal in China. subject is science
At school I because it ’s very interesting.
like playing football and
I won’t
’s rather boring. I play guitar well, so I join
in the school rock band. In the afternoon we usually play football or tennis. We usually got home at about 5:30 pm. For weekends I often go out for a swim, which is really relaxed. Do you like sports and games What do you like to play I ’m looking forward to get your early reply. Yours truly,
Jack
II 、( 本大题共 4 小题，共 40 分 )
27.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，
请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共
有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧） ，并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词； 2.
只同意改正 10 处，多者（从
第 11 处起）不计分。
My father is now in his late forty but he looks young for his age. He is very strict in his heart. with me, especial Once I fail to
in my studies. Besides, do well in my math exam, I
On contrary,
I know he loves me deeply was afraid that it would
my best
make my father angry and disappointing. to feel
bad about one and two failures
he said I had tried
and offered him a few words of encouragement. He told me that there is no need
and the most important
thing is to learn
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anything from failure and never give up. Today is Father say thank you for my father. 28.
’ s Day and I want to
下边短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增添、删除或改正某个单词。 增添：在缺词处加一个符号（∧） ，并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： 1.
每句不超出两个错误；
29.
下文中共有 10 处语言错误，每行中最多有两处。每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删 除或改正。
增添 : 在缺词处加一个漏字符号
( ) ，并在其下边写出该加的词。
删除 : 把剩余的词用斜线 (\\) 划掉。
改正 : 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意 :1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词
;
只同意改正 10 处，多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
A performance in our city is making people to think more about the overuse of plastic bags.
In front of a supermarket, five volunteers
wore white plastic
bags and walk
around and through the crowd.. The plastic of
performance called
on people to use less cloth bags instead of from customer
the plastic bags wore by the performers were collected
in two food markets and all others were collected by 700 students from a
secondaryschool. On that day, after leaving the food markets, customers were
asked to hand in the plastic shopping bags that we didn ’t need. Several hundreds plastic bags were collected for just two hours. 30.
第一节：短文改错
( 共 10分,每题 1分,满分 10分)
该文中共有十处错误 , 每句中最多有两处 , 错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。
增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ∧), 并在此符号下边写出该加的词。
删除：把剩余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
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改正： 在错的词下划一横线 , 并在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意： (1) 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
(2) 只同意改正十处 , 多者 ( 从第 11 处起 ) 不计分。
In recent years, more and more young people have joined in the NEETgroup. They neither go to college or receive any training for future work and depend on their parents for a living. Most of us are aged from 16 to 30.
In my opinion, it is shameful for the young not to make their own responsibility for their own life. Parents get old, how if someday they can not provide anything Beside, society may break without the involvement of young people. Be independent is the key to success. The young generation should never forget that.
短文改错 16-1-3
【答案】
1.
Dear Peter,
As the Internet
is developing fast,
more and more new words and phrases
examples.
have been created in Chinese. Here are some
One of the most popular words are
you quite agree with someone. Another example
Dianzan, which is often use when
is
ed
is Renxing. When we say somebody is whatever they liked. The phrase
us
Renxing, you mean that they will do Miaosha first came
you
like
on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide used when you
from
others
idely
achieve your purpose in
＾ very short time. If you will describe somebody as
w
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a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.
a
You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning,
＾ you'll
know more about our language and culture.
and
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
2.
In my village a lot of children have left school for many different families are it
poor to send their children to school
earn money to support their families ．There are also many parents
to send their children to school
something else rather than think every necessary play
let them go to school
． I feel worried
． Some
，so their kids have to
do not think
this ． I
． They prefer to have their children do
should have the opportunity to receive education us to care about the children
part in the construction
off their studies
．And it is
， because one day they will
important of our country ． So ways must be found
． to prevent children from
3.
1 第一句把 usually 改为 usual 2 第二句把 while 改为 when 3 第二句把 hear 改为 heard 4 第四句把 shocking 改为 shocked 5 第四句故去掉 the
6 第四句把 peoples 改为 people 7 第五句把 but 改为 and 8 第七句把 his 改为 my
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9 第七句在 saved 的前方加 was 10 第八句把 with 改为 of
4.
【小题 1】第一句中的 shall →should
或去掉 shall
【小题 2】第一句中的 specially →special 5. 6. about
to
animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows
did---do
My father took me out camping for the first
time when I was seven. He wanted
∧ teach me
for hunting.
came
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue.
Just then a bird was flying over us. My
having
uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the
arrows hit the target. Suddenly
immediately at None
the arrows was flying down at us from the sky We ran to escape but
were
删除 were 或 looked
fortunately no one was injured.
— they were looked like rain!
and
That day I didn ’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I
learnt a impressive lesson about
an
gravity! 7.
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略
8.
It was^ quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, read the Sunday newspaper and expecting a
a
readin
g
couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her
hours
d
hear their
Sunday clothes. They said, to find your house.
“Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy
” One lady
But
said, “Well, your husband is very kind to inviting us to tea. ” I thought, “My God, my husband must have
invite
been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my
happily
husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they should have gone to the house on the another side
other
of the street.
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9.
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted ∧ teach me about
to
animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
came
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire,
then a bird was flying over us. My uncles
h
aving
immediatejumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the
have our barbecue. Just
immediately
none arrows
was
flying down at us from the sky
—
at
they were looked like rain!
We ran to escape
were
删除 were 或 looked
butfortunately no one was injured. and
That day I didn
learnt
’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I
a impressive lesson about
an
gravity!
10.
This morning I went to the there, I noticed a
shoes shop to buy a pair of new shoes. When I got
talk
to a
foreign lady
shoe
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talking
the
salesgirl
looked
didn't
understand
that
the
foreigner
was
both
worrying. I went up to help them. The
what
worried
lady is ∧Australian.
an
She wanted to buy a The lady was very
pair of traveling shoes. So I told it to the salesgirl.
much glad when she
删除 much
took it. She sings them
high
sang
All
of them expressed their thanks to me. I
praise for my spoken English. felt
happy that I expressed myself
free in English.
Both
freely
11.
I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I
on
giving
teach them, play with them, ^watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to
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and
am it
be a teacher. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take
knowledge
good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true.
well
them
come
12.
I saw an accident happen on my way to home this afternoon . A girl as well as her classmates
were crossing the street on a zebra crossing after a young man drove a motorbike towards her . The
was
when
young man saw the girl and tried to stop , and he drove too fast to stop . He hit the girl and fell off
but
his motorbike . The girl was bad hurt and couldn ’t move . The young man didn ’t know how to do .
badly
what
I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed . Soon the police arrive . They sent her^ the hospital at once .
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arrived
to
One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking .
policemen
I think it is danger to drive very fast .
dangerous
13.
think-thought
in countryside-in the countryside or- and
on the development-with the development have been shown-have shown seriously-serious airs-air Much-Many found-find your-our
14.
1. 第一句 was 去掉 2. 第二句 me→myself 3. 第三句 tight →tightly 4.
第五句 becomes→became
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5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.
第六句 branch →branches 第六句 ready 和 new之间加 for 第七句 astonished →astonishment 第八句 to →for 第九句 where→when 第十句 That →It
15.
1. 删除 far ； 改为 moved； 改为 another ； 改为 classmates;
改为 and ；
改为 worse;
school 中间加 my； 改为 tired ；
改为 asleep ；
改为 are 。
16. 略
17. 81.
I ’m glad to hear the news what you’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit.
You know, Hangzhou is
that
the
beautiful city on the east coast of China. It is said that Marco Polo, a
Italy
traveler
well-known
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a
Italian
once visits
Hangzhou, and was struck
city
beautiful
cities
with a long history.
it has a lot famous temples
It was the capital
of several
dyn
asties.
As a result,
by its
beautifully
scenery. Hangzhou
is one of the oldest
visited
of
and old towers. The West Lake, with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around,
and
attracts a large number of visitors at home and at abroad. I think you have a good time during your
’ll
stay in Hangzhou. I ’m looking forward to see you here soon.
seeing
18.
【小题 1】stay 改成 staying 【小题 2】how 改成 why 19.
【小题 1】seriously---serious 【小题 2】drink it ---- 20. 21.
【小题 1】general 改成 generally 【小题 2】followed 22.
改成 following
把 it 去掉
five-minutes改为 five-minute
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【小题 1】general 改成 generally 【小题 2】followed 23.
Andrew is a 28－year － old American man， life without arms or legs
like a monster ． Doing normal things up， and after many failures
he completed university and earned
When
altitude
seemed
is very difficult
because he
born
改成 following
． Some people used to make fun of him and said he looked
to him ．However， Andrew never gave to swim ， fish and even surf
． Most ，
， be finally
two degrees ． Now he is the CEOof two ． ， Andrew's answer is ： Attitude is
has enough determitmtion to
about the secret of his succss
． To him ， nothing is impossible if
overcome difficulties ． He thinks a positive attitude is the key success ． 24.
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I readadvertisement in yesterday's in your public by your Li Hua
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【小题 1】a— an 【小题 2】flower--flowers 【小题 3】see--seeing 【小题 4】to--with
【小题 5】mustn’t —couldn ’t 【小题 6】去掉 who/ 加上 are 【小题 7】加上 upon 【小题 8】promise--promised 【小题 9】left--leaving 【小题 10】去掉 the 26.
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【小题 1】which------ who
【小题 2】but------ and/so 【小题 3】Our------ My
【小题 4】won’t------ don’t 【小题 5】play 和 guitar 之间加 the 【小题 6】把 jion in 中的 in 去掉
【小题 7】got------ get 【小题 8】For------ At/On
【小题 9】relaxed------ relaxing
【小题 10】 get------ getting
27.
1. ... in his late forty ...
2. ... especial in my ...
3. Besides, I know ...
4. Once I fail ...
5. ... angry and disappointing. 6. On contrary ...
7. ... offered him a few... 8. ... one and two ...
9. ... learn anything from ... 10. ... say thank you for ...
28. 改为 difficult
52. hardly 改为 hard
53. asking 改为 asked her to 中去掉 to
改为 thinking
改为 both
前加 the
forty → forties especial
→ especially
Besides → However
fail → failed
disappointing → disappointed
contrary 前加 the
him → me
and → or
anything
→ something
for → to
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改为 test.
改为 or
改为 did
29. (1)to think 改为 think
(2)walk 改为 walked
(3)less
改为 more 或去 less
(4)wore 改为 worn (5)customer 改为 customers (6)all others 改为 others
或 all the others
(7)after
改为 when/on/upon
(8)we 改为 they (9)hundreds 改为 hundred
(10)for
改为 in/within
30.
【分析】
1.
文章介绍跟着网络的快速发展，出现了一些新的词汇。1. are ----is
。 one of the most popular words
。 Dianzan 和 use 是被动关系。
3. we ---- you。这篇文章主要使用第二人称。 4. liked ---like。这篇文章主要使用一般此刻时。 5. on---- from
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6. other ---others ----widely
。这里泛指“其余人”用 others 。 。修饰动词 used 用副词。 8. in 后加 a。 in a very short time 在一段很短的时间里。泛指“一段很短的时间”用不定
冠词。 very 是辅音音素开头的单词。
9. 去掉 will 。 if 指引的时间状语从句，用一般此刻时取代一般未来时。
10. you ’ll 前加 and。使用句型：祈使句 +and/or+ 简单句。并且两句话是顺承关系。用 and 连结。
2. 略 3.
1 第一句句意：上周六，我像平时同样去图书室。像平时同样 改为 usual 。
2 第二句句意：大概中正午分，我正在在湖畔念书，就在那时，我忽然听到有人哭着喊 救命。 when就在那时，相当于 at then ，而 while 是“在 时期”的意思。故把 改为 when。
as usual 。故把 usually
while
3 第二句中，因为是描绘过去的事情，应当用一般过去式，故把 4 第四句中，表示人感觉震撼用 5 第四句中，抽象的远处用
-ed 形容词，故把 shocking
，故去掉 the 。
hear 改为 heard 。 改为 shocked 。
in distance
6 第四句中， people 是会合名词，后边不用加 7 第五句中，“ took off my coat 关系，是顺承关系，故把
s，故把 peoples 改为 people 。
”与“ jumped into the water quickly”不是转折
but 改为 and。
8 第七句中，依据句意，应当是“让我宽慰的是”，故把 his 改为 my。
9 第七句句意：儿童获救了。 kid 与 save 是动宾关系，应当用被动语态，故在 前方加 was。
saved 的
10 第八句中，“以 为骄傲”应当是 4.
be proud of ，故把 with 改为 of 。
【小题 1】第一句中的 shall →should 或去掉 shall advise 语气，即谓语动词要使用“ should ＋动词原形”的形式， 也正确。
【小题 2】第一句中的 specially →spec ial something 置定语修饰不定代词，可是副词不可以够修饰不定代词。
后的宾语从句要使用虚构
should 能够省去，即删去 shall 是不定代词，形容词能够作后 【小题 3】第二句中的 it 前加 to respond 是不及物动词， 若要跟宾语， 后边需要加 to 。 【小题 4】第三句中的 best 前加 the 最高等前方平时要加定冠词。
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【小题 5】第三句中的 appreciations →appreciation
此处
appreciation
表示“感
激”，属于不行数名词，不行数名词没有复数形式。 【小题 6】第四句中的 will 去掉 some...others... 【小题 7】第六句中的 which →what which 词性从句时能够没有疑问含义，相当于 能够有疑问含义，此时与
【小题 8】第六句中的 bring →bringing 入时间 / 努力 / 金钱等在 上边”，此中 【小题 10】第七句中的 us→ourselves 形式。 5.
属于表示列举的固定句型，前后的
时态应当保持一致，依据上句的“ Some choose... ”，可知此处应用一般此刻时。
指引名词性从句时有疑问含义 ... ，在本句中相当于 the things that...
what 指引名
；也
which 的差别在于能否有范围限制。
devote doing
sth. 属于固定搭配，表示“投
to 是介词，后跟动名词形式。
【小题 9】第七句中的 mean→means 动名词作主语，谓语动词需用单数形式。
作宾语的代词为主语自己时，需用其反身代词
去周末学校补习在我们学生们中特别流行。 好的周末学校有优异的教师， 他们能够帮助 提升我们的学习成绩，其余，我们还能够认识好多来自其余学校的学生，认识他们的校 园生活。可是不好的方面是，周末学校的学习会增添我们的课业负担，所以对这人们要 谨慎考虑。
【小题 1】 did---do 。观察动词时态。 So did many of my classmates. 用一般此刻时，再依据主谓一致的原则，把 【小题 2】which —who/ that 该定语从句的先行词是 或许 that 。
schools 。依据 schools
整篇文章都使
did 改为 do。
。观察关系代词。 which help us improve our studies.
which 改为 who
teachers ，所以应当用表示人的关系代词，把
【小题 3】another — other 。观察不定代词。 we get to know students from another
和后句中的 their 改为 other 。
能够判断此处是指其余学校，
another 只修
饰单数名词，故把 another 词 campus 修饰名词 life
【小题 4】去掉 of 。观察介词。 and learn about their campus of life.
，故去掉 their 。
。此处是名
【小题 5】 so—but 。观察连词。 So every coin has two sides. 此处表示转折，故把 so 改为 but 。 【小题 6】lesson----lessons 改为 lessons 。
【小题 7】 pay----paying 动名词 paying 。
依据上下文意思可知
。观察名词单复数。 Extra lesson often take up too much
lesson
of our time. 依据文章内容和动词 take ，能够判断主语应当是复数名词，故把
。观察非谓语动词。 pay lots of attention to the extra
lessons will affect their school subjects
。动词原形不可以做主语，故把 pay 改为
【小题 8】their ----our 。观察物主代词。 pay lots of attention to the extra lessons will affect their school subjects. 依据上文可知文章用的是第一人称，指的是我们
学生们，所以把 their 改为 our 。
【小题 9】very ----too 。观察副词。 Wemay also find ourselves
to concentrate on the lessons in our own school.
very tired on Mondays
从句意可知此处表示“太 而
是最
不可以”，故把 very 改为 too 。
【小题 10】 make 后加 the 。观察冠词。 and make best use of our time. best 高级，前方应当有定冠词 考点：观察短文改错。 6.
（ 1） wanted 后加 to 试题剖析：固定搭配
want to do sth
the ，故在 make后加 the 。
想要做某事； to 是不可以省略的，不定式
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to do sth. 做 want 的宾语。故 wanted 后加 to 。 考点：短文改错 - 缺词 （ 2） come改为 came
试题剖析：依据本文第一句可知叙述的是过去发生的事情， 应使用一般过去时，所
以用 came。故 come改为 came。
考点：短文改错 - 错词
（ 3） have 改为 having 试题剖析：本句中动词
上的主动关系，所以使用此刻分词在句中做状语。故
考点：短文改错 - 错词
（ 4）immediate 改为 immediately
来修饰谓语动词 故
试题剖析：本句中应当使用副词
have 与句子主语 we 组成逻辑
have 改为 having 。
immeately immediate
jumped，在句中做状语。形容词 immediate 不可以做状语。
改为 immediately 。 考点：短文改错 - 错词 （ 5） on 改为 at 试题剖析：固定搭配
者方向。故 on 改为 at 。 考点：短文改错 - 错词 （ 6） Neither 改为 None
试题剖析：代词 neither 表示二者都不 ；而本句中没有说起二者，应当是
有好多的鸟。故使用
none 表示三者或许三者以上的所有否认。故
Neither 改为 None。 arrows ，所以谓语动词
考点：短文改错 - 错词
（ 7）was 改为 were 试题剖析：本句的主语是复数名词
使用复数形式 were。故 was 改为 were。
考点：短文改错 - 错词 （ 8）去掉 were 或许 looked
试题剖析：本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用
like ：像 同样。故去掉
（ 9） but 改为 and
试题剖析：我们四周逃跑，很好运的是没有人受伤。依据上下文语境可知该句
表达的是并列关系。故 but 改为 and。
考点：短文改错 - 错词
（ 10） a 改为 an 试题剖析：后边的形容词
改为 an。
考点：短文改错 - 错词
impressive 是以元音音素开始的，所以用
an。故 a
were 或许 looked 。 考点：短文改错 - 多词
look like ：看起来像；要么使用
be
shoot..at ，不可以使用介词
on。 at 表示对准的对方或
7. 略 8.
第一处： quiet
a 前加
用不定冠词， quiet 是辅音音素开头的单词。
因为这里泛指一个明朗的下午，
第二处：read 改为 reading
这里是非谓语动词作陪伴状语，
因为 I 和 read
是主动关系，用此刻分词作陪伴状语。
第三处： hour 改为 hours
名词复数。
hour 是可数名词，和 a couple of
搭配用
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第四周： hear 改为 heard 这是回想一个下午的事情， 用一般过去时。
句意：我看见 12 个女子衣着她们
’，用 their 。
第五处： her 改为 their 的礼拜天的衣饰。指代 the ladies 第六处： so 改为 but
找到你家不简单。两句话是转折关系。 第七处： inviting 第八处：去掉 for 某人进入房间。
上句说：我们希望不迟，下文说：
改为 invite
这里是词组： be kind to do sth。 ask sb into the room请
第九处： happy 改为 happily 第十处： another 改为 other the other 。 9.
修饰动词 talk 用副词。
街道有两边，一边是 one，此外一边是特指。用
1. wanted 后加 to ；观察 want 的用法： want to do sth ；
2. come 改为 came；观察时态，全文叙述过去发生的事情，用一般过去时；
3. have 改为 having ；观察非谓语动词， 动词 have 和主语 we 之间有逻辑上的主谓关系，故应用动词 ing 形式；
4. immediate 改为 immediately ；观察副词的用法。此处修饰谓语动词 jump up ，故
用副词 immediately ； 5. on 改为 at ；观察动词短语； shoot at
对准 ... 射击；
6. Neither 改为 None；观察代词用法，此处表达的是一个也没有，是多个，不是二者都不，故把 Neither 改为 none;
；此处观察谓语动词单复数，主语 7. was 改为用were
复数形式，
the arrows 是复数，所以谓语动词
was 改为 were；
8. 删除 were 或许 looked ；看起来像能够用
look like, 或许 be like
都能够；
9. but 改为 and；此处观察并列连词，并列关系用
and，转折关系用 but ，此处是并列
关系，故把 but 改为 and；
10. a 改为 an； impressive 是以元音开头的句子，故前方要加 10.
1. 鞋店的英文应为 式。
2. notice sb doing sth 表示“注意到某人正在做某事”，此处表示“我注意到一个外国女士正在和一个销售小姐发言”。
the shoe shop ，直接用名词 shoe 修饰名词，不用
shoe 的复数形
an.
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3. 此处为宾语从句，从句中缺宾语，用 what 连结，表示“销售小姐不理解外国人说的什么”。
4. -ed 形容词修饰人， -ing 形容词修饰物，此处修饰人的表情，指“看起来忧愁”，故用 -ed 形式。
5. Australian 表示“澳大利亚人”，这里主语是 “一个”澳大利亚人，用不定冠词an。 6. 此处有 very 修饰， much为剩余，故删去。 7. 由句意可知，拿走的是一双鞋，为复数，故应用 8. 全文为过去时态，故用 sing 的过去式 sang。 9. 此处指 salesgirl
和 Australian lady
the lady ，为第三人称单数，所以是
them 指代。
两个人，故用 both ，而不用 all 。
express 。
10. 此处用副词 freely （任意地；自由地）修饰 11.
短文粗心： 这篇短文叙述的是作者想成为一名老师， 所以作为学生此刻要努力实现梦想。 第一处：在讲台上用介词
但甚至成为一名教师不是那么简单，
on the platform ，故把 in 改为 on。
第二处： and 连结两个并列的动词， standing
和 give ，做 of 的宾语， give 形式应与
standing 形式一致。故把 give 改为 giving 。 第三处：三个以上连续的动作，最后一个动作用
and 连结，故此处加上 and。 第四周：依据短文时态是一般此刻时，可知此处是时态错误，故把 第五处： It is+ 形容词 +to do sth. 故把 there 改为 it
。
was 改为 am。 it 做形式主语。
句型中 it 是形式主语，英语中只有
第六处： knowledge 是不行数名词，故把 第七处：此处修饰动词
knowledges 改为 knowledge 。
good 改为 well 。
teach ，英语顶用副词修饰动词，故把
your pupils
第八处：此处表示照料上文提到的 them 。
，应当用代词 them 取代，故把 it 改为
第九处：英语中 though 和 but 不可以连用，故此处把
but 去掉。
第十处： make sb. do sth. 让某人做某事， 用不带 to 的不定式作宾语补足语， 故把 comes 改为 come。
12.
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短文粗心： 这篇短文叙述的是作者今日下午回家的路上看到一同交通事故， 车因为速度太快撞到了正在过马路的女孩。
一辆摩托
1：此处是固定搭配，“ on my way home”在回家的路上， home 做副词，在此前不需要加 to ，所以去掉 to 。
2：此处观察主谓一致。主语后跟有“ as well as ”指引的短语，谓语动词应当和主语 a girl 保持一致，所以把 were 改为 was。
3：此句句意是：一个女孩和她的同学正在斑马线上过马路，这时一辆摩托车向她开过 来。“ be doing...when... ”句型中 when 译为“这时”，是附属连词。所以把 after 改为 when。
4：此处观察连词。依据句意可知前后两句是转折关系，所以把 5：此处观察词性。此处表示严重受伤， 而 bad 是形容词，所以把 bad 改为 badly 。 6：依据句意可知，年青人不知道该做什么，应当用 逻辑宾语，所以把 how 改为 what 。
and 改为 but 。
badly 严重地，做副词，修饰动词was hurt
，
what to do 做宾语， what 做 do 的
7：本短文介绍过去的事情，用一般过去时态，此处 以把 arrive
改为 arrived 。
arrive
应当用过去式 arrived 。所
8：表示“送某人去某地”应当用 send sb. to sp. ，所以此处加上 to 。
9： one of 后边跟可数名词复数，所以把 10： It is +
形容词 +to do sth.
policeman 改为 policemen 。
是固定句型， dangerous 形容词，在句子作表语，所
以把 danger 改为 dangerous 。
13.
think-thought;
依据上文讲的是小时候，应选择一般过去时。
在乡村是固定搭配。
in countryside-in the countryside; or- and; 并列关系选择 and。
on the development-with the development; have been shown-have shown; seriously-serious;
跟着 ... 的发展 with the development 。 研究表示是主动，无需用被动。
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airs-air; 空气不行数。
Much-Many; 动物可数应用 many 来修饰。 found-find;must
神态动词后加动词原形。
your-our; 人称代词前后保持一致，整篇文章都是第一人称。 14. 1. 第一句 happen 是不及物动词，
不可以用被动语态。
2. 第二句依据句意 : 我拥抱我自己，需要用反身代词。 3. 第三句 修饰动词 squeeze 需要用副词。 4. 第五句
回想患病时发生的事，用一般过去时。 5. 第六句 branch 是可数名词，应当用复数。 6. 第六句 be
ready for sth.
固定词组。
7. 第七句 to one's astonishment 固定词组构造，令某人惊讶的是，需用名词。8. 第八句 feel thankful for sth. 因为某事而感谢，感谢用 for 。
9.
第九句
the time
先行词表时间，后边的关系词需用介词加关系代词或许直 接用关系副词，所以只好用 when。
10 第十句 it 取代动词不定式短语，作形式主语。
15.
前方已经有详细的
350miles, 不可以重复使用。
2. 和 last week 连用，用过去式
moved。
其余的 ，应当是失掉一个工作，好运地又找到另一个 (another) 工作。
4. 爸爸有了新工作意味着我要和我的同学们说再会了。同学应当是复数 classmates 5. 向同学、学校还有其余的全部，应当用and。
make things worse 常用插入语，意为 \" 更为糟的是 \" 。 7. 应当是我的学校。
8. 我累了，修饰人，应当用过去分词tired 。 9. 和 fall 连用，系表构造应用 asleep 。 10. 和 you 连用，主谓一致，应当用
are 。
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16. 略 17. what---that
， 此处是 that 指引的同位语从句；
the--a ， 此处是泛指；
Italy--Italian
， 形容词修饰名词；
visits--visited，once 以前，所以用一般过去时；
beautifully---beautiful, 形容词修饰名词；
city--cities
， one of 后加名词复数形式；
a lot 后加 of ， a lot of 很多，大批；
or--and, 并列关系用 and；
at 去掉，国内外固定搭配 at home and abroad ；
see--seeing,look forward to
中 to 是介词，后加动词 ing 形式。
18.
这是作者写给 David 的求援信，作者常常考试舞弊，感觉愧疚，可是自己又改不了，所以向 David 征采建议。
【小题 1】stay 改成 staying ，句意：近来我感觉很愧疚，夜晚睡不着觉，这里是此刻分词做陪伴状语。
【小题 2】how 改成 why ，从后边的 it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams ，可知是问原由。
【小题 3】seldom 改成 often ，句意：我常常考试舞弊。 【小题 4】me改成 myself ，主语是 I ，宾语应当是 myself 。 【小题 5】answer 是可数名词，
改成 answers 。
【小题 6】观察词组； refer to my notebooks 参照笔录。
【小题 7】so 改成 and，有时看笔录抄东西，是并列关系。
【小题 8】do 改成 does
主语是动名词 cheating ，谓语是单数。 【小题 9】take 改成 took 或前加 should ，It ’s time + 从句的句型，从句顶用虚构语 气， sb should do
或 sb did 。
【小题 10】 it 后边加 if ，句型 I would appreciate it if ，假如 我会很感谢 。 考点：观察短文改错 19.
此刻环境污染日趋严重。不单人们没有洁净可饮用的水，并且因为树木遇到砍伐，一些动物也灭绝了。人们的健康遇到了空气，噪音和水污染的严重影响。为了过上更美好的生活，作者呼吁到了人们该治理污染，保护环境的时候了。 【小题 1】 seriously---serious
。 The environment pollution is more and more
seriously
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【小题 2】drink it ---- 把 it 去掉。 We have no clean water to drink it 。此处是
it 。 down
不定式做定语，不定式的动词和被修饰的名词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系，故去掉 【小题 3】trees--- 后加 are 。 And when trees cut down。此句中 tree 和谓语 cut 之间是被动关系，应当用被动形式，在
cut 前加 are 。
【小题 4】was -- is 。 There was more and more dirty smoke in the air. 境可知此处是说此刻的状况，应当用一般此刻时，把 【小题 5】affecting---affected 【小题 pollution.
air, 。依据句意可知此处是此刻达成时的被动形式
。依据语
was 改为 is 。 has been greatly ，把 affecting
disease
。People’s health affecting by 。
改为 affected
6】 disease----diseases。 Many people have died of disease caused by 。 disease 是可数名词，应当用复数形式，把
the 改为 a。
改为 diseases 。
..
【小题 7】the----a 。 In order to live the better life, life “过着 的生活”，所以把 【小题 8】what----which
。 固定短语： live a
。 what saves money and reduces pollution.
which 。
。此处是非限
制性定语从句， what 不指引定语从句，改为 possible “尽可能”，把 【小题 10】 cut---- cutting 考点：观察短文改错。 20.
【小题 9 】 so -- as 。 Use things so long as possible.
so 改为 as。
固定短语： as ..as
。 we must plant more trees and stop people cut them down. 固定短语：stop sb from doing sth “阻挡某人做某事”， 所以把 cut
改为 cutting 。
【小题 1】五分钟，应当说 five-minute 。
【小题 2】这里含有一个非限制性定语从句， 且关系词在从句中作地址状语， 故用 where。 【小题 3】一般此刻时中，且主语为第三人称单数，所以 【小题 4】这里含有一个省略了 在时，所以 needed 改为 need 。 【小题 6】在右侧，应当说 on the right 【小题 7】在 的终点，应当说 【小题 9】用副词修饰动词。 【小题 10】 want to do sth. 考点：观察短文改错 21.
lie 改为 lies 。
that 的定语从句，依据句意，定语从句中要用一般现
【小题 5】300 米应当说 300 meters 。
。
at the end of
。
【小题 8】and 连结两个并列的句子。
是固定用法，意思是想做某事。
文章介绍高三的学生广泛面对好多压力。提出一些减压的方法。 【小题 1】高三的学生广泛面对好多压力。修饰 generally
be faced with
用副词： general 改成
【小题 2】下边的建议可能会帮助减少它。 Following “接下来的” 【小题 3】第一要知道是什么致使压力。
【小题 4】确立不太高的目标。这里是定语从句： 【小题 6】有时找时间放松。这里用祈使句： 【小题 7】观察词组： go swimming 去游泳 【小题 9】 your classmates, your teachers, 前方加 and 考点：观察短文改错
What 做主语谓语用单数： lead 改成 leads
what 改成 which/that finding 改成 find
【小题 5】观察词组“ in other words ”换句话说： another 改成 other
【小题 8】和他人交朋友。 Make friends with sb. 和某人交朋友
your parents 是并列关系， your parents
【小题 10】观察词组“ in trouble ”有困难，去掉
the
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22.
文章介绍高三的学生广泛面对好多压力。提出一些减压的方法。 【小题 1】高三的学生广泛面对好多压力。修饰 generally
be faced with
用副词： general
改成
【小题 2】下边的建议可能会帮助减少它。 Following “接下来的” 【小题 3】第一要知道是什么致使压力。
【小题 4】确立不太高的目标。这里是定语从句： 【小题 5】观察词组“ in other words ”换句话说： 【小题 6】有时找时间放松。这里用祈使句： 【小题 7】观察词组： go swimming 去游泳 【小题 9】 your classmates, 前方加 and 考点：观察短文改错 23. 略 24. 略 25.
What 做主语谓语用单数： lead 改成 leads
what 改成 which/that
another 改成 other
finding 改成 find
和某人交朋友
【小题 8】和他人交朋友。 Make friends with sb.
your teachers,
your parents 是并列关系， your parents
【小题 10】观察词组“ in trouble ”有困难，去掉
the
试题剖析： 本文主要叙述了作者去医院探望艾滋病病人的一件事。 【小题 1】 a— an 观察冠词。不定冠词 我们去探望一个住院的艾滋病病人。 【小题 2】 flower — flowers 需要用复数形式。故把
告诉我们艾滋病病人
会遇到鄙视，以及平时接触不会感染艾滋病。呼吁我们一同关爱这些不幸的人。 前用 an，本句中的 AIDS 是以元音音素开头的，故把
a 和 an 的差别在于：在以元音音素开头的单词
a 改成 an。句意为：上个礼拜日，
观察名词。 flower 是可数名词，依据前方的 some可知，
flower 改成 flowers 。句意为：我们给她带了一些鲜花和水果。
avoid 以后需要用动词的动名词形式担
【小题 3】 see— seeing 观察非谓语动词。动词 当宾语，故把 see 改成 seeing 。 上 。句意为：在她感染上 毒不会经过平时沟通感染。而 意为不会、不可以。
【小题 4】 to — with 观察固定短语。此题观察短语： be infected with
，意为：感染
HIV 病毒后，好多人开始防止看到她。
【小题 5】mustn’t —couldn ’t 观察神态动词。依据句意：一名医生告诉我们
HIV 病 mustn’t意为严禁，所以把 mustn’t 改成 couldn ’t ，
【小题 6】去掉 who/ 加上 are 观察定语从句或非谓语动词。此题有两种改法。第一种： 去掉 who，此时 suffering
担当后置定语，修饰 those ，表主动蒙受。第二种：在
who
以后加上 are ，担当定语从句的谓语动词。
【小题 7】加上 upon 观察短语。此题观察固定短语： 此题为被动语态，此时必定要注意不行忘记介词 那些得了艾滋病的人也不该当被瞧不起。 事情，故用一般过去时，把 后还回来看她。
look down upon，意为：瞧不起。
upon，故此题需要加上 upon 。句意为：
【小题 8】promise — promised 观察时态。依据上文可知，作者叙述的是上个礼拜日的
promise 改成 promised 。句意为：我们在走开前答应她以
【小题 9】left — leaving left 改成 leaving 。 观察非谓语动词。介词 before 以后应当用 ving 形式，故将
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【小题 10】去掉 the 观察冠词。观察短语： in trouble ，意为：处于不幸中。在这个 短语里，不可以够用冠词，故去the 。句意为：假如我们所有人都相互热爱、帮助那些 掉 不幸的人，那么这个世界会变得更为美好。 26.
试题剖析：
【小题 1】 which------ who 观察非限制性定语从句， an Australian boy
。
是先行词，
指人，用 who，故把 which------ who 【小题 2】but------ and/so 进或因果，故把 but------ 【小题 3】Our------ My won’t------
我特别喜爱汉语，所以我想交一此中国笔友。此处表示递
。
and/so
我最喜爱的科目是科学，故把
Our ------My 。
【 小 题 4 】 won’t------
don’t 。
【小题 5】play
don’t
我不喜爱历史。是一般此刻时态，故把
和 guitar 之间加 the “弹吉他”英语的表达方法是
之间加 the 。
play the guitar ，
故在 play 和 guitar
【小题 6】把 jion in 中的 in 去掉 句意是： 所以我加入了学校的乐队 组织等，表示加入某个组织或团队。故把 【小题 7】got------ get 【小题 8】For------ At/On 写，故把 For------ At/On
relaxed------ jion
后跟团队、
jion in 中的 in 去掉。
依据句意可知此处是一般此刻时态，故把 固定搭配“在周末” at/on 。 。
got------ get 。
weekends，因为是开头，要用大
【小题 9】 relaxed------ relaxing
relaxing
。
句意是：去游泳这件事是令人放松的。故把
【小题 10】 get------ getting get------getting
固定搭配 look forward to
后边用 doing 做宾语，故把
考点：观察短文改错 27.
1. 第一句中，“在某人四十多岁的时候”应当用“ in one’s forties ”。故 forty → forties
；
especially 。故 especial
→ especially ； Besides → However ； fail → failed ； → disappointed ；
2. 第二句中，特别是，特别是
3. “要求严格“与”他心里深爱着我“是转折关系，故 4. 描绘以前发生的一件事用一般过去时，故第四句把
。故第四句把 disappointing
5. 感觉绝望的 disappointed 6. 相反 on the contrary
。故第五句在 contrary 前加 the ；
7. 第五句中，依据上下文可知应当是给“我“一些鼓舞的话。故把 8. 一两个 one or two
。故第六句把 one 后边的 and → or ；
him → me；
9. 第六句后边分句的意思应当是：最重要的就是从失败中学到一些东西，永不放弃。
故把 anything → something ；
10. 对某人表示感谢 say thank you to sb. 。故最后一句把 for → to 。
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28.
51. 该句里 difficult 把 difficulty
做 the test
。
的宾语补足语，此中构造为
find sth +
形容词。故
改为 difficult
52. try hard to do sth
努力做某事， hardly 几乎不。故把 hardly 改为 hard 。
53. 该句中 ask 作谓语，所以需要用 ask 的过去时 asked 。故把 asking 改为 asked 。 54. let sb do sth
为固定构造，故不用
to 。故 let her to
中去掉 to 。
55. 该句中 after 为介词，以后需用动词的 ing 形式。故把 think 改为 thinking 。 56. 依据语篇，文章中只波及到作者和他朋友两个人，故用 者或许三者以上。故把
all 改为 both 。
both ，而 all 指代范围为三
57. same 前平时加定冠词 the 。故在 same 前加 the 。
58. 此处只波及到前文说起的 chemical test ，不波及其余的测试， 故用单数。故把 tests 改为 test 。
59. 两句之间的关系不是因果关系，故不可以用 为 or 。
60. 整篇文章叙述的是一件过去的事情，动词要用过去时。故把 29.
(1) 多词。观察固定构造 make sb. do sth. 使某人做某事， sb. 后跟动词原形作宾语补足语，故 to think 改为 think 。 原答案只供给了九处错误，本处的错误没有找出。
does 改为 did 。 so，而用 or （不然）表警示。故把
so 改
(2) 错字。观察时态。 and 连结两个并列的谓语动词，第一个谓语动词为过去式 第二个谓语动词 walk 也要用过去式，故 walk 改为 walked 。
(3) 多词 / 错字。依据语境可知，此次表演呼吁人们使用布袋取代塑料袋，故 more 或去 less
。
wore，
less 改为
(4) 错字。观察非谓语动词。 此处要表达“被表演者穿在身上的塑料袋”， 和 wear 之间是动宾关系，要用过去分词作后置定语，故
plastic
bags wore 改为 worn 。
(5) 错字。观察名词的复数。此处应为复数观点的“顾客们”，故 customers 。
customer 改为
...一些 ...... (6) 多词 / 缺词。观察固定搭配 some...others all the others...
此外一些 ......
； some...
一些 ......
其余的 ......
。故 all others
改为 others 或 all the
others 。
(7) 错字。依据语境，此处应为“一走开食品商场”或“当走开食品商场时”，而不是 “走开食品商场后”，故
after
改为 when/on/upon 。
(8) 错字。观察代词。 依据语境， 顾客们被要求上交他们不需要的塑料购物袋，指代 customers ，故 we 改为 they 。
要用 they
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(9) 错字。观察单复数。当“百、千、万”等被数词或 thousand 等要用单数形式。故
several
等修饰时， hundred 、
hundreds 改为 hundred 。
in 或 within ，故
(10) 错字。观察介词。依据语境，此处为“在两小时内”，要用介词 for 改为 in/within 30.
。 1. 参加某组织，成为此中一员，用join 。故第一句中把 joined 后边的 in 去掉。 nor 或许 或许 。句意：他们要么上大学，要么接受培训。故把
or 改为 nor ；
故第
3. “他们要么上大学， 要么接受培训”与下文“他们依赖父亲母亲生计”是转折关系。 二句把 and 改为 but ；
4. 依据上下文串连，可知第一段最后一句句意为：他们中大部分都是 us 改为 them；
5. 肩负责任 take responsibility 6. 由代词 their 可知后边的 live
16 到 30 岁。故把
。故第二段第一句把 make改为 take ； 应当用复数。故第二段第一句把
life 改为 lives
；
7. 第二段第二句句意：父亲母亲在老去，若是有一天他们不可以供给任何东西了该怎么办呢 what if 意为“若是 该怎么办”故把
how 改为 what ；
除此以外。故把
Beside 变成 Besides ；
9. 第二段第三句句意：除此以外，没有了年青人的参加社会就会衰败。衰败衰败，崩溃，毁掉。故在 break 后边加 down；
break down
10. 动名词作主语。故把 Be 改为 Being 。
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