六级提分

3. 六级的作文得高分比四级难很多，从上述第二点差异外。四级考生中，受试者水平有较大差异，四级写作中经常读到一些令人啼笑的幼稚表达和字数都写不够的文章，因此对于阅卷者而言，作文质量和分数高低有直观的判断。但大部分六级考生有一定写作基

础，虽然不能说水平多高，但大部分字数都能写够，这种情况下高分作文更要胜在质量上。

以2013年12月六级考题为例： 2013年12月之“信息爆炸”

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of information explosion by referring to the saying\"a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention\". You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information? You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200words.

范文与思路（非模板，表达及其功能仅供参考）

首段：背景 话语评论

(背景)The past decades have seen the speedy development of information technology.（引入话语）However, there is a simple but thought-provoking saying “a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”,

and (话语联系主题)this saying can be naturally associated with the double impacts of IT on our life:（主题评论） if we do not intend to live in a life of “attention poverty”,it is advisable for us to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. （背景特征）The contemporary society is best characterized by “information explosion”, and（现象） it has become a common phenomenon for us to be affected/ influenced/ impacted by various information. （举例 相关人感受）A case in point is that an increasing number of students find it rather difficult to focus on reading books, studying in class time or listening to a lecture, just because of cellphone messages, rings and We chats.（危害：弊） It is these irrelevant information that does not enable youngsters to concentrate on studies. （总结）As a matter of fact,intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative influences of modern information technology.

（观点）As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. （建议1）Accordingly, it is essential for every one to power off cell phones before class time, meeting or other significant occasions.（建议2） Then, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends,classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness.

2013年6月真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.” You can cite some examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

首段：话题引出 评论

This is a simple but thought-provoking remark: A smile is the shortest distance between two

people. Obviously, this saying can be naturally linked to the significance of smiling in human communication: if one intends to shorten his distance with others, it is advisable for him to keep smiling.

二段：现象 意义

(现象)In our daily life, it is a common phenomenon for us to regard smiling as a symbol of kindness, friendship or warmth. Meanwhile, a host of individuals find it rather comfortable to communicate with those with smiles. Our life has been filled with a variety of examples like this: (排比)smiling helps friends to enjoy close friendship; smiling helps family members to enjoy harmonious atmosphere; smiling even helps strangers to break embarrassment. (意义)Actually, it is one’s smile that enables him to build a closer relationship between others. Without smile, it is impossible for others to deem us as friends.

(建议)As a youngster, I am convinced that it is

of great necessity for us to face life with smiles. Accordingly, we can shorten the distance between friends, classmates and acquaintances. （展望）Sparing no efforts to keep smiling every day, we can witness a promising and hopeful life in future. （199 words）

图画作文

Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the impacts of electronic products on interpersonal relationship. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

(图片来源：网络) 首段：图画描述

This is a thought-provoking and enlightening picture: all members of a family sit at a table, enjoying a family reunion with 按expectation of communicating with each other ; however, all kids and their young parents focus their attention on phones or laptops. The aged grandma and grandpa seem lonely. 二段：

（图画联系主题）Such a cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of electronic products on our daily life. (简单评论)If we intend to enjoy/ gain/ get a harmonious relationship in life, it is not advisable for us to ignore people around ourselves.（现象概述）In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of youngsters

to have/ possess/ buy/ various high-tech products for fun. （相关人+感受）Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find it rather colorful to live a life with these products. (强调句式) However, it is these products that do not enable young people to care more about people around. (万能举例)Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like the scene in picture above. (万能总结)As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have not come to realize the negative impacts of electronic products on our life.

(观点)As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to refuse/ reject / resist the bad influences of electronic products on life.（建议）Thus/Accordingly/ Hence, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on food safety problem. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

(图片来源：网络)

Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: a young guy opens a tin and tries to enjoy the delicious food; to his great surprise/ shock, a horrible “ghost” suddenly comes out of the tin.

Such a picture can be naturally associated with the importance of food safety in real life: if we intend to enjoy safe and healthy food, it is advisable for the whole society to combat (应

对) this problem. In contemporary China, it has become a trend for our media to be filled with various reports about food safety. Meanwhile, an increasing number of individuals find it rather difficult to know whether their food is safe or not. However, it is safe food that enables the public to enjoy happiness, health and promising life. As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of food safety in our daily life.

As a customer, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for food manufacturers to refuse making poisonous food/ adding anything harmful to food. (Thus, it is essential that regulations should be worked our and enforced to punish dishonest food makers.) Lastly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to choose natural and green food.

图表作文：

很多同学都担心图表描述不会写，四六级作文的评分重点不在图表描述，而在二、三段的阐述上。那么多图表，其实使用“功能段落”的表达就够了。

以下表达和框架均为“现象段”内容：活学活用即可。

Based on the chart, from 1990 to 2000, it had become a trend for college students to spend an increasing number of hours on computers: the number was only 2.3 in 1990 and it increased to 17 in 2000. In the meanwhile, we can notice that the speed of rising was faster from 1995 to 2000.

二段：原因分析（略）

三段：我的看法（略）

这样的图，不是四六级考试要描绘的重点。重点在第二、三段上，如果你一直在描绘图表，满分15分的原始赋分也就6分。

Based on the right chart, in China, it has become a trend for students to get 90% of their income from parents. In the meanwhile, we can notice that 50% and 35% of American students' income is from parents and part-time job.

二段：原因分析

三段：观点建议